Tuesday, July 3, 2018

Sonnet I Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lo! As a crafty girl child crawls off her mother's lap
Makes her premier touch on the course ground
Full of impediments and so lovely a trap
And produces her so sweet enchanting sound
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Maangi Mongare Kevin
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Chinedu Dike 03 July 2018

A beautiful love poem written in heightened poetic diction with clarity of thought and mind. Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Mongare and do remain enriched.

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Maangi Mongare Kevin

Maangi Mongare Kevin

Nyamira County, Kenya
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