Monday, September 26, 2011

Sonnet Iii Comments

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Your heart speeds up you cannot speak,
You feel a fever in your brain.
You notice your pores have sprouted leaks,
You feel you've gone insane.
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Juan Olivarez
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Stefanie Fontker 26 September 2011

I like your poetry, your sonnets especially. I've never been good at them, but you've got a real talent. I suppose practice is key, I'm sure you've had a lot of it. I'm guessing this comment will be gone soon though, I at least hope you'll enjoy it for a little while.

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