Soon

Rating: 5.0

I have spent too long
In this cage forged by regret
Will I ever leave?

I carry these chains
Forged by bitter memories
Will I ever be free?

And where is the key?
Is it in my heart? My mind?
When will it find me?

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Santana Marasco 12 May 2006

Thank you, Sherrie, Archangel of Erucition, Gonzales-kolb. Good to see you grasped the concept. ps. That's not your real name is it? Because if it is, how long did it take for your parents to agree on it?

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This is a winner, Giovanna. The key is in YOU.

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***** ********* 23 April 2006

You and me both Giovanna! Why does it take so long I wonder? Thank you for expressing my own caged existence with such splendid haiku style, hopeful as always, with 10 from another fan of haiku, Tai

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Santana Marasco 21 April 2006

It's three Haikus that make up one poem! It's like a super Haiku combo!

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