Louise Wilkinson


Sorry

Poem by Louise Wilkinson

Hey. I think I may have offended you.
So I thought I'd write this to say
Although i didnt mean to,
Im sorry for what i said today.

I know I can act spoilt, an it kinda gets you mad,
but I dont mean it, and I dont mean to get you sad.
So although your at rugby, and don't really care,
I just want you to know that I will always be there.

You and Me. Complicated, I know.
I don't want to string you along, just for my affection to show.
I really hope that one day we can be more than just friends,
Even though it seems right now like I'm in a relationship that will never end.

I really love the way you are, meaness and all,
I know you'll be there to catch me if i fall.
I loved dancing with you, and even more so playin Poke,
Which nothing really rhymes with, except the word Moke!

I know you don't trust me, I know thats hard for you to do,
But I want to say again, I will always be there for you.
I know this poem is awful, by large amounts,
I know its bad, but hey. thought that counts? !

For You.


Comments about Sorry by Louise Wilkinson

  • Jeff HobbsJeff Hobbs (7/2/2006 6:44:00 AM)

    Baroke, smoke, folk, revoke, stoke, toke, awoke - I guess I should say sorry for that too! This is a poem which is so filled with the absolute moment and situation that it comes of as a part of the reality of life. If only people could say sorry in such a way more often.... me included!(Report)Reply

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  • Séamus Fox (7/2/2006 5:24:00 AM)

    Bloke joke soak stoke. This is lovely Louise heart on your sleeve I like it people dont show their feelings enough thats why there is so much animosity in the world.

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  • Sugar Bear (7/2/2006 5:19:00 AM)

    Aww! This poem is Beautiful! Not awful at all!(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 12, 2010