Ahmad Husain

Freshman - 838 Points (29/07/2001 / Gaya (Bihar) , India)

'Sorry' And 'Please' - The Words Losing Their Value - Poem by Ahmad Husain

Sorry and please
Are the two words,
Which have lost there meaning
And became absurds.

Earlier, we used
These words as a request,
Now, we use them
As a part of our conquest.

Earlier, we used them
To plea to another,
Now, we use them
As an order to our mother.

People use it
As a formality of their own,
And because of these words
They are popularly known.

People say these words
Sorry and please,
Either they have killed someone
Or have got caught as a thief.

These words are used
Widely over the world,
Some get them as a respect
While others get these hurled.

Either a person is
Literate or not.
With these two words
He is always caught.

People use these words
Either angry or cool,
These words are used
To make someone fool.

Without meaning people use
These two words,
In this generation
These are not more than absurds.

Topic(s) of this poem: feelings


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem was written by me when I was still new to writing poetries. This poem is base on how people commit mistakes and just ignore them, and when caught, they use these words in order to avoid consequences, but without any real feeling. This poem was written in mid 2013. As I was still new to writing, this was not so well composed.

Comments about 'Sorry' And 'Please' - The Words Losing Their Value by Ahmad Husain

  • Ramesh Rai (6/14/2015 12:41:00 AM)


    you are excellent right. i am moved with your wisdom. stay blessed.100% marks. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (4/4/2015 1:10:00 PM)


    The meaning is more than the composition, Ahmad. You did a good job making a point. Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 4, 2015



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