Sorry Dad Poem by dodo hilton

Sorry Dad



i tell you a story about a dad ***that was great but one day with his daughter was mean and bad***but i believe that he has a heart that it's true***and i don't want anyone new ***cause looking at u is my favorite view**your are a mericale from god and i believe***and i'm sireous i don't deceive***and please control your nerves***but i deserve***but i was realy ubset***but never mind always happy and sad met***i don't want you to loose time***cause i just wanna say sorry about that crime***because i didn't care about you the legend of my live***and i promise you i will make my live thrive

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Ravi Sathasivam 26 November 2009

I am sure your father will forgive you. When you understand your mistakes, that will pave your way to live better life. Keep cool. I like your writings. Keep it up

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