dodo hilton

Sorry Dad

i tell you a story about a dad ***that was great but one day with his daughter was mean and bad***but i believe that he has a heart that it's true***and i don't want anyone new ***cause looking at u is my favorite view**your are a mericale from god and i believe***and i'm sireous i don't deceive***and please control your nerves***but i deserve***but i was realy ubset***but never mind always happy and sad met***i don't want you to loose time***cause i just wanna say sorry about that crime***because i didn't care about you the legend of my live***and i promise you i will make my live thrive

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 25, 2009

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (11/26/2009 2:08:00 AM)

    I am sure your father will forgive you.
    When you understand your mistakes, that will pave your way to live better life.
    Keep cool.
    I like your writings. Keep it up

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