Sorry Lover Poem by Sean Green

Sorry Lover

Rating: 4.5


Sorry lover but you can't look back
to the sheets thrown to the floor
forgotten while bodies press
ghosts lost to passion's bliss

promises once had a place
fealty against death's cold hand
the declarations none will admit
when light of day too soon arrives

strong emotions aren't cast aside
instead replaced with grounded angst
along with rage of what should be
tears spilled on pillows drenched

promises lost along with pride
if only this came to pass
along with advice none request
sorry lover please don't look back.

© 2019. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved.20190905.

Friday, September 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lovers
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem "Sorry Lover" was loosely inspired by the song "Written in Blood" by the group She Wants Revenge.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Krokos 06 September 2019

I liked this poem, though on the second line where it's written - " to the sheets thrown to the floor" - there may be a typo because I think it should be written as - " to the sheets thrown on the floor" . Otherwise well done.

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