Friday, September 6, 2019

Sorry Lover Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sorry lover but you can't look back
to the sheets thrown to the floor
forgotten while bodies press
ghosts lost to passion's bliss
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George Krokos 06 September 2019

I liked this poem, though on the second line where it's written - " to the sheets thrown to the floor" - there may be a typo because I think it should be written as - " to the sheets thrown on the floor" . Otherwise well done.

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