Sowing Poem by Rahul Shil

Sowing

Rating: 3.5


You're big bad,
Awaken the feeling of love in itself
You are crying now.
You're a fool,
Whoever comes and tears you down,
And my miserable mind
You're really stupid.

You may have forgotten,
Everybody here is a vulture,
Where to get food
There they put the handbag.
This is their traditional characteristic.

There is no existence of survival here.
If you want to live, then you have to live their lives.
You do not have any feeling of love there.
As much as you Shower your love
You will never be able to plant the seed of love.

Everyone here is violent,
There are live, still lifeless.

Saturday, November 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: society
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Debnath 09 January 2018

Your poem is so satire..... I vote you 10+++++++

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Rini Shibu 04 November 2017

Well constructed poem about violent society.

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Rahul Shil 08 November 2017

Yes.....I wrote this poem about violent of society...... In fact, I have always found trouble and sadness from this society. There is no tune of living here. So, writing this poem is a vilification on this society. Thank you for comment my dear poet Rini.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2017

You are a fool if you cry by the harsh realities of life.. your distractions will find thousand ways to make you cry, forgot and forgive..! An excellent poem dear poet, I liked it...10

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Rahul Shil 06 November 2017

In fact, I have always found trouble and sadness from this society. There is no tune of living here. So, writing this poem is a vilification on this society. Thanks for comment and report and vote.Thanks my dear..... I like u too.

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Rahul Shil

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Mirza, Udaipur, Gomati, Tripura
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