Space Poem by Jeanne Fiedler

Space

Rating: 5.0


There is a new force
an excitement stirring
inside me...childlike...
I'm a child to the loving,
flowing universe...
My father is the ocean,
My mother is the earth,
I, with broken consciousness,
and particular estrangement,
flow into the vast void
which mends
me with compassion,
truth, harmony and
oneness...
It instructs my
artwork which
teaches me its
laws,
and flows
back into the
eternal space...
remaking me,
I have cocreated
with the divine
the space that
meets and heals
sick, drowntrodden,
special, needy
people who melt
into its love...

It becomes a
flowering
orchard,
the trees speak
to us in their
language,
the changing
seasons,

the spirit,
wild and free,
calming and changing
is connecting me
to greatness -
grandeur of a loving
God...

I was limited by
my mind, but I
have moved into
the eternal life
that is endless
and infinite...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 July 2011

Excellent poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has a strong structure. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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