Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Speaking Metaphorically Comments

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Metaphors understand my being as they speak,
Inside their skeleton is a cause and response;
Flesh takes form, blood rushes, and the born are living
Among us when they hatch from oblivion and other options.
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Naveed Akram
metaphor Seasons Philosophy honesty
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Rajnish Manga 19 November 2014

Thanks Naveed. I liked your poem but you are trying to say a number of things at a time. This leads to a loss of final impact. Regards.

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Naveed Akram

Naveed Akram

London, England
Naveed Akram
Naveed Akram
London, England
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