Speaking My Mind Poem by Tsholofelo Phakathi

Speaking My Mind



speaking my mind.

i am holding these pen writting on the paper on top of the table sitting in the chair.

if i can die today where would i go?
will i go to heaven and be with god or would i go to hell and yell in there.
will people cry because they miss me or would they celebrate my funeral.
would the world be a better place without me.
would people lough at me as i am lying in my last house.

speaking my mind.
not that i want to die*never! ! ! * but than people sometimes you have to just think ahead like imaginating about life.
speaking my mind.
2sholo4elo da poet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 27 July 2015

I am thinking that English is your primary and that perhaps you have a secondary. Do not rush a word not formed still takes on a picture in your mind. Don't let others influence you use whole words instead of or Type your and where others take short cuts there are none. Perfect each spelling and go back and respell it and then take off like the spirit within you, your dreams.. Good luck in this your endeavor.. iip

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