Spinning Poem by Taylor Heald

Spinning

Rating: 4.5


i can hear my heart pounding,
i can hear it racing,
i can hear everyone screaming.
The room is starting to spin,
faster, faster, faster.
Im loosing my breath.
Spinning in circles,
over and over again.
Spinning in circles,
when will this end.
'I need to stop right now'
she says as she throws down the bottle,
never again will she take another sip,
till the next few days when he hits her.
There she is again,
Faster, faster, faster.
She's loosing her breath.
Spinning in circles,
over and over again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 16 January 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Taylor. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Taylor Heald 06 July 2008

Woooh :) im bomb <3 hahah: D

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