Spirituallife Poem by Dr.Balnarayana Bandam

Spirituallife

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The spirituality, alike, consumer book
Ideal-living to adopt, awaykeeping is
Putting finger and getting shocked

Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: living
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is smooth and soft with a spiritual way of living
One find several books, aiding as, lifetime consumer guide
Better to follow and live ideally
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ink of Sin 20 June 2018

Dear Poet I've learned - A Haiku consists of 3 lines and 17 syllables. Each line has a set number of syllables see below: Line 1 – 5 syllables Line 2 – 7 syllables Line 3 – 5 syllables but you are composed- The spirituality, alike, consumer book = 13 syllables Ideal-living to adopt, awaykeeping is = 13 syllables Putting finger and getting shocked = 8 syllables sorry for this comment

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