Patience

Rating: 5.0

Good-natured tolerance of delay or intelligence lack
Success is more appraise while patience is at aback
Lordwith the spouse of goddess wealth, never need
Yours offers of money, delicious food indeed
His like is of your patience and devotion,
Valmiki, though a robber, did penance till anthill develop, with devotion
Becomes a saint and writes Ramayana the Lord Sri Rama's anecdote
Beingcalled the first epic in Hinduism to denote
Shibari, the tribal women, waits long with patience
till the Lord, SriRama visits and blesses with pleasureimmense
The stork stands still with patience till the fish be trapped
The passenger waits with patience until the train or bus toboard
As sown seeds need time to sprout out become a tree
To yield with flowers fruits needs time to agree
The same God to respond thypenance requires your patience
Wait and wait till the Lord's arrival and blessings
Hurry in acts ever to lead to worries, never a route for blessings
Unless dusk sets in, for the Night queen there will set no bloom
If not, the Sunsets and dawn comes lotus will not bloom


Raw food needs time and patience to cook delicious
Natural unripe fruit needs to get time to become ripe and taste delicious

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poemexplains the sort of patience toadopt for the success
In life goals, including devotion and getting blessed
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2020

Raw food needs time and patience to cook delicious Natural unripe fruit needs to get time to become ripe and taste delicious. Set goals and work hard to achieve. naturally it needs great patience. A great advice dear poet. tony

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Deluke Muwanigwa 30 November 2020

True true. " Quick time short time" . Good poem and so true

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Chinedu Dike 30 November 2020

Really an interesting rendition nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Balnarayana Bandam 30 November 2020

the poem is all about the relation between man and patience and towwards the God SHIVANI

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