Splendor Solis Poem by Patti Masterman

Splendor Solis

Rating: 4.5


Sun our father, Moon our mother;
Whom might we oppose?
Earth and heaven go unleavened
Less is blessed, by those.

Things above and things below
Seldom will depart the likeness
They were made together,
By creator's art.

Flamel's fire is full of ire
To find the antidote,
While stones philosophize our sighs
Who left here, on this mote.

We harmless hold the souls
Of old, who toyed with the world
To find the secret grail of time,
Its secrets to unfold.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 19 January 2012

Some very good metaphores in here. I liked the secret grail of time. By the way, thanks for your comments. Wonder if you have yet read - We the Unencumbered- Adeline

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