Spring Break Poem by Vincent Toll

Spring Break



Removing Everything from
the Newly Uninhabited,
broken down building.

Repairing and Replacing
all of the broken devices,
left by the old inhabitants.

Filling up the holes
in the dirty, broken walls
of this Abused Home.

Repainting and Refurbishing
the Corroded Floors and
the Newly repaired walls.

Working and Cleaning
from Dawn till Dusk,
All Spring Break.

*This was one of the poems that i wrote in my Writer's Notebook that i had to write for my English 3 class in the first five minutes of class. So I never really developed it out.

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brittany 28 September 2009

this will be beautiful once you develop it out :)

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