Spring Silly Poem by Michael DawesSmith

Spring Silly



An elaborate diamond apparatus
Peach pink and gorgeous

A sordid monkey symphony
In a garden dream delirious

Together they spray rose summer worship
To the languid luscious enormous goddess

Monday, October 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love educates
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Douglas Scotney 13 October 2014

that's spring alright, Michael: 18 adjectives,14 of them full-blown out of 29 words. Reminds me of the art lecturer who told me if you're going to use glue you can see, use lots of glue.

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