Wednesday, December 14, 2005

Stairway To Heaven Comments

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Drifting on wings of an agnel,
The stairway to Heaven unfolds,
The steps leading up to a city,
The pathways transparent of gold.
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Jean Penner
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Michael Voorhis 14 December 2005

I dont think you should have named it what you did or added 'stairway to heaven' anywhere in your poem since that is already all too popular, and has no meaning anymore. that is the only problem I have with it

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