Standing With Out Me Poem by alone by day alone by night

Standing With Out Me

Rating: 4.5


I hate that i have to wait for you
all thought it mkae me like you more.
it kind of makes me wonder,
what am i waiting for?
my heart starts poundign
my eyes start to swell
you think that i dont notice
but its you that cannot tell
i ask for you answer
over and over again
i have so much to say
but where do i begin
you try to avoid me
you do it so well
hypnotized by thoughts of you
im under your spell
i cant stop thinking
will you say yes
your driving me insaine
im a total mess
am i even alive
or invisable to you
i cant take this pain
the pain you put me thru
should i just forget you
should i leave you be
you're standing in the hall
standing with out me
you talk as if im nothing
or that this feeling isnt there
but you know what?
to me
that isnt even fair
i could forget you
thought it seems impossible to me
if you give me a chance
maybe you would see
you are the rainbow
that brightens my day
though im alone
i still feel this way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Zinbabora Batung 26 November 2011

Its great when can express himself/herself this way. ITS A WONDERFUL PIECE. kEEP INTOUCH WITH MY PAGE.

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Miss Rainbow 19 February 2010

that was amazing i really liked it tell me when you post another poem I'd like to read it

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Melina Bamforth 24 June 2009

that was so lovely thanks...

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Amani B 01 May 2008

wow that was really good keep writing``````````'''''''...........

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