Kristian McEwen

Rookie (11-27 / alabama)

Star - Poem by Kristian McEwen

look up at the stars what do you see?
do you see a plane old star or do you see something new?
look at all the formations of them no two are the same
do you ever wounder what it would be like if you could just reach out and grab one with your hand.
if you were able to grab one what would other people say/
would you walk around with it hanging there? or would you have it hiden?
they say stars are ment tio shine so would you let it or would you KILL it?
so make a wish apon a star and wunder who you are.
because with only one star you could have a million.

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  • (5/3/2011 12:50:00 PM)


    Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery.
    Fine poetics.
    A big...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 4, 2011


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