Star - -To My Beloved Poem by chentong tian

Star - -To My Beloved

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I rose up as soon as the day broke

Saw a frightened foal

His bright mane

Is an aquatic plant whose name has been forgotten


Is an aquatic plant whose name has been forgotten

once upon a time we passed a pond it danced

and sat down

You had just turned to me

before I warned 'No kiss allowed now'


Because we were waiting for messages from stars then

which require complete silence

but nothing came until warmth of the swing went away

except the mocked, youngest death


He cannot tame the foal too

or close its moist eyes

Its moist eyes

Gathered and buried all songs from the universe


Making the universe reticent and old

I have been regretful since then

Maybe your kiss could

Melt the sun, the moon and stars

Now please empty the universe- -

And leave us alone

Saturday, August 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: forgotten,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 26 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Chentong. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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