Monday, June 2, 2014

Stardust Reverie Comments

Rating: ★4.8

Everyone wants to be famous,
seeing their name in lights
and their star shining bright.
A few actually do see
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David Harris
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 02 June 2014

Well-written poem. I think perhaps you might want to have the posthumously on a separate line by itself (just a thought) . Also, in the second to the last line, I think there should be an of before them: and each of them. Loved it.

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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Bradfield, England
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