Michael James Kennedy Findlay

Rookie (20/04/1988 / Gloucester, Gloucestershire)

Starlight Night

Poem by Michael James Kennedy Findlay

We lay hand in hand, head to head, eye to eye

The stars staring down, as if they were in envy

The moon radiating light upon us, as if it we were a showcase

The passion which was united, a passion of true love

Passion which wrote upon paper, can never portray my passion for you

True passion is like a song, A never ending list of cords and notes

An innovation of a creative mind, written from the soul and heart

A never ending canvas of joys and memories

True passion can never die, it can never fade away, for it lies deep down

You are my true passion, my true calling, my true love


Comments about Starlight Night by Michael James Kennedy Findlay

  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (11/15/2015 11:36:00 PM)

    Delicate words such as these are required to express the warmth of true love between two soulmates whose duet is 'A never ending list of cords and notes. An innovation of a creative mind, written from the soul and heart. I love it, James. Thanks.(Report)Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (11/15/2015 3:21:00 AM)

    True passion can never die, it can never fade away, for it lies deep down
    Gem of a thought. Very beautiful poem full of passions. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10+(Report)Reply

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  • Seema JayaramanSeema Jayaraman (11/15/2015 12:51:00 AM)

    True passion lives and lasts for ever.. true passion hides deep in the heart and soul.. thanks for sharing(Report)Reply

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  • Susan LacovaraSusan Lacovara (9/5/2014 12:48:00 PM)

    Michael, the heartbeat of your passion loud as a drum. Beautiful....simple truth! I in it you to stroll thru my words, as well. PEACE, .Susan(Report)Reply

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  • Dawn FuzanDawn Fuzan (5/14/2014 4:54:00 PM)

    Micheal This is an interesting piece of poetry keep it up(Report)Reply

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  • Cierra Mallette (2/6/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    I love the way you use different literature tools to describe how you feel about your spouse/ mate(Report)Reply

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  • Annej NostreborAnnej Nostrebor (7/11/2012 11:56:00 PM)

    i really love this. touches home. stay passionate.(Report)Reply

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  • Honey Bateman (2/22/2006 11:54:00 AM)

    Very great - I wished, I could feel this once in my life... I wished, somebody could feel for me that way.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 25, 2005