Stars Poem by Patryk Krzywon

Stars

Rating: 5.0


Take the time to look at the Stars in the sky,
They're the tears that we cry that light up at night;
They're the ones we mourn, the ones we aspire to,
We've learnt that they're gases, but I say they're fire too.

And Shooting Stars are the ones we forget,
They leave, leaving space for the things we wish to get;
They fall from the sky when figure them out and see,
We don't speak of our wishes, 'cause they can only live in secrecy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlette Romero 21 April 2009

Very nice Rhyme very catching.andi give you a ten.

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Very nice rhyme.I wish our night sky would clear up so we can see them again.I gave you a ten.

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Patryk Krzywon

Patryk Krzywon

Mikolow, Silesia
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