Friday, June 26, 2009

States Of Mind. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grey is a mind-map, sleep too
Is weak when it dreams gigantic
Lonliness, creating traps,
Covering moods with fine fabric
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~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2009

Fay...this piece gives the reader such a possitive vibe to it....great feel..expressed by your golden pen.....excellent write my dear poetess

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Fiona Davidson 26 June 2009

Excellent poetry Fay as always a wonderful read....Fi 10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Lovely positive poem,10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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