Friday, March 9, 2018

Stepmother's Message To Her Step Daughter Comments

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You are not born out of me,
I've come in your mother's place,
I want to beat my own fate,
unfortunately at your pace.
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Geeta Maheshwari
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 March 2018

Thanks to Cinderella and Snow white for creating the stepmother stereotype, for giving her negative prefixes, and damaging her psyche.. the great lamentation of a step mother.... very well conceived and presented with great images....... tha nk you dear poetess. tony

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Ravi Kopra 09 March 2018

Good poem for Indian families, Geeta. May be it needs some polishing up.

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Ravi Kopra 09 March 2018

Step children She loves your father Your father loves you Love moves in circles Let her love you Your mom is gone forever Never will she come back to you How lucky you are There's another mom to love you Love her, She will love you Make puri-parathas for you Make bhujia, ladoo, sambar for you And take you to the malls to have fun with you.

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