Saturday, November 15, 2014

Still Breathing Comments

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Expressions are dead for ever,
Gone are days when i looked clever.

Emotions have lost their identity,
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 November 2014

You have expressed your despair that's the nice yet at concluding you should make it positive ..poem would have fantastic try - you wrote well

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