Thursday, April 26, 2007

Stolen Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

The waters rippled on an incoming tide
The shimmering finger of the moon
Danced on the small waves
A hiss of rolling stones broke the silence
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David Harris
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 April 2007

I kiss you my love upon the shore, you are my love forever more... Beautiful poem and romantic too..! I know David you swear your not a romantic, but this is worth a ten my friend... Andy..

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Michael Fischer 26 April 2007

Great poem! I liked the imagery and the language used. 'The shimmering finger of the moon danced on the small waves' was the most memorable line in your poem! Top marks! -Michael

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