Storm Poem by Nomad Omnia

Storm

Rating: 2.8


Do you want to hear it?
That I am smitten,
No, hopelessly
In love with you.
Would it give you pleasure
Or would it bring you pain?

I see it in your eyes.
You know, you want
What you deserve,
That I can give.
But it’s a bonnie road
That leads to hell.

This afternoon, the coiled air
Struck out at the searing sun
Exploding into crackling light
and booming rain.
It shook us all.
But it was cool again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone Away 25 February 2010

How did I miss this one the first time? the pressure of choosing appropriate words of praise gets me again! full of honesty and passion.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 November 2009

I've been down that road.

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Marieta Maglas 27 November 2009

No, hopelessly In love with you nice metaphorical poem belonging to lyrism 10

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