Thursday, October 13, 2011

'Stress'(Sad) Comments

Rating: 3.8

There is a plague that sweeps this land.
From its raging rivers, to its desert sand.
It hides in the shadows,
Yet plane in sight.
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 25 October 2011

Short and punctual, you never admite directly to what your stating, but the title inferrs what the subject matter is about. The last four lines have some ambiguity for me and I like the contradiction between the last third and secound line. Suggesting the best solution to conflict is to admite defeat. (atleast that's what I'm getting)

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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