Subconscious Loss (2008) Poem by David Joel Rodriguez

Subconscious Loss (2008)

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I knew if I closed them
I'd still be able to see you
Though you left once again
I captured your baby blues

Never thought it could happen
and I knew I'd see you soon
I just didn't know when
so I dozed off to the moon

When I woke, I became sad
I dreamt of you last night
To me, it was very bad
(I still blame the sun light)

Somehow I lost you
I looked everywhere
I could not find you
lost in mental despair...

Don't know why I began to cry
I didn't want to stop exploring
and no matter how hard I tried
I couldn't control my own dream

Friday, October 1, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: subconscious
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