Suddenly Poem by Makooi Advincula

Suddenly



Our relationship mesmerizes like a sunset in the sky,
Like the indescribable feeling we both couldn't deny.
Like the things we do together with our bond,
Like fulfilling the things that we both want.

Our relationship we two didn't expect,
With the joy and memories we simultaneously collect.
And even if we are aware that our relationship isn't perfect,
I vow that for all the times, you I will always protect.

No day spent wherein I didn't think of you,
And everyday I ponder I'm falling deeper in love with you.
But sometimes, my anxiety's growing with the thought that you don't feel the same way too,
Because the sweetness and the happiness are slowly turning so blue.

Where did I go out of line?
To being not the same; our relationship I couldn't define?
Our bright blooming relationship suddenly turns so blue,
Tell me now, are you still in love with me like you used to?

Tuesday, May 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 May 2019

Heartfelt poem with strong emotions. Passionate piece of poetry nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Makooi.

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