Suicidal Mind Poem by austin hardr

Suicidal Mind

Rating: 3.5


</>Most of you don't understand what cutting does for me,
You don't understand that cutting has saved me.

My blade is my messiah,
It has helped me cut, helped me bleed,
Made miricals happen i can't even begin to believe.

I do hope one day i don't have to cut,
But for now it's the only way i can keep my suicidal mind shut.

Ill tell the truth this time,
i usually lie so you don't cry,
I'm sorry to say this,
But i don't think nothing,
Can stop my running,
Suicidal mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pari Dharawat 04 November 2011

Well STOP SUICIDEL MIND.... we all know that thoughts are insane....mind is cryptic and makes you want to do stuff you later regret...mind plays with you always and in different ways...know these playing tactics of your mind and use this muscle and tame it and control it for yor good. it is possible. poem is graphic and it gives a picture which is indeed harsh to see. thats what a poem should be grasp the reader, you did a good job. keep writing.

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Aditi Khandelwal 04 November 2011

Life is very short and too beautiful to waste it by suicidal thoughts. This poem is good if it has nothing to do with you. If it is about you then look around you will see that everyone loves you & you are not alone... hope you are fine :) Aditi

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