XxEmotional PoetxX

Rookie (June 4,1995 / Indiana)

Suicide - Poem by XxEmotional PoetxX

A person can only take so much,
In my hand, A knife I clutch,
I want to take my life away,
And tell how worthless I am, To say,
I have a frown upon my face,
I want to run away from this place,
And end my life, I want to die,
My head upon my hands, I cry,
To comfort me, It will not work,
Away from the world, I want to jerk,
The one's who love me, Try to make it better,
Forever unknowing, Of that one short letter,
The letter I wrote before I died,
The letter I wrote, of Suicide.

Comments about Suicide by XxEmotional PoetxX

  • (5/10/2008 3:39:00 PM)

    i like your poem its kewl but its the same as every suicide poem (Report) Reply

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  • (5/4/2008 8:57:00 AM)

    i like ur poem it is simple and right to the point and it rhymes! i can never really get my poems to do that i cant find the right words! lol... i am new to this site and i will be writing stuff like this.. u r welcome to come check out my poems in about 2-3 days when i have more on here :) (Report) Reply

  • (5/2/2008 3:50:00 PM)

    whoever gave you a rating of one sucks! ! !
    i like it because people often look down on others who commit or think about commiting suicide...
    i think you would like the poem i wrote called 'No more crying' because it has the same idea!
    us young writters need to stand strong and stick together! ! ! !
    good job!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, May 2, 2008

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