A person can only take so much,
In my hand, A knife I clutch,
I want to take my life away,
And tell how worthless I am, To say,
I have a frown upon my face,
I want to run away from this place,
And end my life, I want to die,
My head upon my hands, I cry,
To comfort me, It will not work,
Away from the world, I want to jerk,
The one's who love me, Try to make it better,
Forever unknowing, Of that one short letter,
The letter I wrote before I died,
The letter I wrote, of Suicide.
i like ur poem it is simple and right to the point and it rhymes! i can never really get my poems to do that i cant find the right words! lol... i am new to this site and i will be writing stuff like this.. u r welcome to come check out my poems in about 2-3 days when i have more on here :)
whoever gave you a rating of one sucks! ! ! lol i like it because people often look down on others who commit or think about commiting suicide... i think you would like the poem i wrote called 'No more crying' because it has the same idea! us young writters need to stand strong and stick together! ! ! ! good job! Jenn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is what everyone needs. a letter a poem to let people know their not alone.