Suicide Note Poem by Silence Dogood

Suicide Note

Rating: 5.0


While you copy what the teacher wrote.
Im busy writting my suiside note.
With my hidden tears and secret smiles.
Boy when I see you it takes me, miles
With my pen in hand writting my last line.
Famous last words and my name i sighn.
Writting the P.S to tell you I care.
Wishing only that you could be there.
For when I hang that rope on my head.
Praying that soon I would be dead.
Too bad I had to end my story.
Before you got to say your sorry.
But its too late to turn back now.
Even if i could I dont know how.
But before I could finish my suiside note.
You looked over your shoulder and saw what i wrote.
You put your hand on my arm and whispered words.
I crumpeled the note for ' sorry' I heard
You told me then three simple things I love you.
After that I didnt need the note.
Or hang my head in a suiside rope.
Because to me there were only two things.
First was you.
And second was me

Tuesday, August 26, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: sorry,suicide,teacher
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arianne Owens 09 July 2011

that was, deep. your an awesome writer.

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Lexy M. 11 January 2011

luved it had me on my toes worndering wats next i would read more if yuhh promise to write more ;)

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Hayley Wilkinson 23 December 2008

wow, mate deep.........

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