Thursday, October 6, 2005

Suicide Number 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The gun I hold
Loaded and cocked
Held in my mouth
Pulled in shock
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D.M. Barber
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James Micallef 20 April 2006

Deep. The use of rhyme is really at the forefront in this piece of prose.

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