Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Summer Oh Summer Comments

Rating: 4.8

Look outside your window
The sun is calling you to come out and play
The pool tempting you to jump in
The air warning you that if you don’t go out you’ll regret it
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Bianca Mckay
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Romeo Della Valle 28 June 2011

A very impressive write, well penned and poignant! This write shows me that you have what ti takes to make it in the poetry world! God Bless you and keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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