Sun And Distance Comments

You and I like an earth revolution Which keeps love of sun in your law of distance..... is so nice. Enjoyed your poem.

As per the crown it says the poem is about the separation of two soul..love in a bubble- an imagery for lusty love that blast and lost the existence and the cause of blast is the protagonist of the poem..again ' Law' as a relation, My poorness of being strong and your fear for frailty, is an endless story &improving elderliness of mine while your youth growing up and up..so what I think is about the relation at old age...and now sun and distance