Sun Is Life's Source Poem by o poet me poety

Sun Is Life's Source

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MY VERSION..
The sunhas come
after the dark night
to give energy
to all on earthwho alight.
Without the sun there can be no life
even with a healthy and beautiful wife
so to give way to it
all stars also take flight

Sir poet am I right

Sunday, December 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hubby,life,lifespan,poetic expression,sunrise,wife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 25 December 2017

Without the sun there can be no life, yes, poet, the sun is empowered to do it, excellent poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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O Poet Me Poety 26 December 2017

i have resumed my old site please read more there kindly poetme yeps poet

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

A fabulous little poem The sixth line is the truth.. very neatly penned....10

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O Poet Me Poety 26 December 2017

sir i have resumed my old site please read more there kindly poetme yeps poet

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