Axiom Wheeler

Rookie (03-09-1992 / Utah)

Sun Shines Down - Poem by Axiom Wheeler

Sun shines down on all of the people around,
and there is no peace to be found.
Life has its moments of joy and dispare,
and there's occasional laughter in the air.

Sun and rain,
Hail and clouds.
People desperate,
People proud.

Remember life as sun shines down,
and never fail to lift above the ground.


Comments about Sun Shines Down by Axiom Wheeler

  • (5/15/2008 3:08:00 PM)


    A sun shining down.. it makes people happy. and you're right about that. but it also makes some others sad... i dont know why but it does. i like it. its nice. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/20/2008 12:17:00 AM)


    An ok poem, I liked it, not too original but good. Keep at it!
    Rhiannon*
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2008



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