Sunday Afternoons Comments

Do you like Nellie? If not I don't like Herbie, unless coming from a friend as friendly fire. H

Herbie i am starting to warm to you seeing a nice tender side to you.

Gyps, the rhyming set-up is deliberate. You will find that every rhyming word has its mate, except one, also deliberate. H

Have the visitors left yet Herbert? This poem has a quirky feel to it. Sometimes it appears to rhyme and other times not. I enjoyed the content but the rythm seemed a little out of time. I will be posting soon and I welcome your comments (so you can get your own back on me then) . Kind regards Gyp's