Wednesday, April 12, 2017

Sunset In Idlib Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked outside and saw her playing in the garden
She looked so pretty, my heart cartwheeled
Pink ribbons adorned her dark brown curls
I waved hello; she beamed a smile.
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 May 2017

A powerful start from sunset, carry on your journey through the dark towards sunrise. Thanks

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Hadiza Sado 14 May 2017

Thank you so much, Jazib. Surely, after darkness comes sunrise. :)

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Dutendra Chamling 14 April 2017

...Because of you, I have no in-laws Because you lied, I lost my mirror.. Beautiful poem, indeed...!

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Hadiza Sado 14 May 2017

Thank you so much for your positive comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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