Thursday, May 3, 2012

Sunset In The City Comments

Rating: 5.0

Huge buildings across the horizon
stand so close to the vanishing sun
a lonely bird cracks into his song
as he sits on the roof of a building.
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Jose A. Carmona
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Romeo Della Valle 04 May 2012

Bravo! What an elegant way to enter into the Poetry World! WELCOME! The melody embedded in each line magically merging into one another gives this well crafted write a total harmony! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up, this is the beginning for in a long journey that will lead you all the way to the top of the Poetry World one day, as long as you are determine! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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