Friday, April 3, 2009

Sunset Serenade Comments

Rating: 3.7

I serenade my love at sunset
beneath the embers of a sleepy sun.
Just before it slips away
behind the distant mountains
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David, This is simply beautiful, or should I say stunning. My favorite imagery 'when day and night collide and beckon evening tide'. It is magic and it flows gracefully until the finale where the sensational title merges with a glorious and peaceful climax. Sorry I can't give it two tens, but you as a writer are allowed one 10. Go on, put it on for me! ! !

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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