Surviving Existence After Seeing Her Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Surviving Existence After Seeing Her

Rating: 5.0


Cool cellar wine,
A summer vintage
Of many drunken seasons lovelorn,
I dreamt of kissing her eyes
On midnights scattered now
To oblivion.

Her waist in the moonlight,
She wore a simple dress more majestic
On her frame than a Rembrandt;
I fell victim to the tender ache of desire,
Orgasmic but as soft as a feather.

Jealousy and deprival,
The wearing away of youth
And tragic denial,
If only to weep
One more time beside her
Or study her slender wrists
Again in the sunlight!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 13 June 2010

The sunshine of a thousand summers captured in the landscapes of your mind. Very compelling.... Always, Sandra

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fleur de lys 03 June 2010

A beautifully crafted poem that begins with a lovely metaphor that invites the reader in and captures well the feeling of intoxication. The description of the girl in the second verse is dream-like, the longing palpable and the simple language here only adds to its power. It continues with a wave of intense pain, the 'tragic denial' that subsides and ends on the wistful tone that leaves the reader reminiscing of their own similar experience.

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