Monday, September 5, 2011

Sweet Dark Naked Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet, dark, naked earth
that the liquid light shines through and shines through,
on it's way to oblivion, on it's way to void,
down past the roots
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Patti Masterman
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Jim Troy 06 September 2011

Upon taking a second look and feeling haunted by the depths and yet somehow reaching to enjoin this fasinating journey down past the roots where the wheel of life toys.... and taking in a deep breath as the poet brings the conclusion like a huge symphony orchestra coming to a finality.... Brings a haunting feeling to me.... Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 05 September 2011

this one has an ancient feel that i love!

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