Sweet Dark Naked Earth Poem by Patti Masterman

Sweet Dark Naked Earth

Rating: 5.0


Sweet, dark, naked earth
that the liquid light shines through and shines through,
on it's way to oblivion, on it's way to void,
down past the roots
where the wheel of life toys.

Try to be air, try to light
the sunlight that blinks, the beams that diffuse,
the perfect rings encircling your being;
time that sings in the moments you chose,
light that smiles on the naked truth.

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Jim Troy 06 September 2011

Upon taking a second look and feeling haunted by the depths and yet somehow reaching to enjoin this fasinating journey down past the roots where the wheel of life toys.... and taking in a deep breath as the poet brings the conclusion like a huge symphony orchestra coming to a finality.... Brings a haunting feeling to me.... Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 05 September 2011

this one has an ancient feel that i love!

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