Alexis Bass

Sweet Surrender

Your smile so sweet and caring
Your hands so loving and tender span my waist sending feelings i can not place.
Your shoulders so wide and strong can help but brushing my fingers along.
I trace your chest down to the hard planes of your stomach.
My fingers swirl in the hair that is exposed.
I lift my face up to yours and find your lips waiting for me.
As i brush my lips oh so gently against yours i stare into your sparking eyes.
Your eyes tell me everything i need to know, i see the passion, the love.
I see your want and desire i can feel it in how tight you hold me.
Then finally your hand rises to cup my face and you kiss me long and hard.
When you lift from your beautifull attack you see in my eyes
I have surrenderd to your embrase

Poem Submitted: Friday, September 25, 2009

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Comments about Sweet Surrender by Alexis Bass

  • Crazy VampireCrazy Vampire (9/25/2009 4:56:00 PM)

    awesome poem! keep writing! :)

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  • Danny H (9/25/2009 4:51:00 PM)

    That is such an amazing, beautiful, and emotional poem :)
    We are weak to our 'ones' touches xD
    thats why we can control them by threatening to not let them touch you
    LOL its mean but sometimes its nessesary

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