Friday, September 25, 2009

Sweet Surrender Comments

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Your smile so sweet and caring
Your hands so loving and tender span my waist sending feelings i can not place.
Your shoulders so wide and strong can help but brushing my fingers along.
I trace your chest down to the hard planes of your stomach.
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Alexis Bass
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Crazy Vampire 25 September 2009

awesome poem! keep writing! :)

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Danny H 25 September 2009

That is such an amazing, beautiful, and emotional poem :) We are weak to our 'ones' touches xD thats why we can control them by threatening to not let them touch you LOL its mean but sometimes its nessesary

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